Monday, October 1, 2012
plot response
The book I am reading right now is called Finally Free. In the book the author talks about his past and then while he is talking about his past he stops and talks about the present. Then, right after he continues to talk about his past. I find this very confusing and irritating. I wish he would just stay in the past until he gets to the present.
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Wait. What? You have a problem with him using flashbacks? Try to clarify this a bit, and try to write a bit more. Dr D will not approve. *Glances around to see if Dr D is listening*
ReplyDeleteMatthew, try to describe the structure of the plot so far. Do you think you are in exposition, rising action, the climax, or falling action? Remember you need two full paragraphs for every post, every week.
ReplyDeleteAlso, include your reading details for the week.
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