It was late monday night and i was thinking about hurricane Isaac. I remember hurricane gustav and how we lost power for days. I was laying in bed wondering if this one would be as bad. I could hear the wind whistling and blowing. The gusts of winds were very strong.
The telivision was on and i was waiting for everything to go black. i eventually fell asleepand finally woke up the next morning and nothing had changed. The news said that the hurricane would be near by 7 Tuesday night. The weather worsened and and lost power while I was asleep. It came back on not much later. We eventually lost and regained power three more times. This hurricane was not nearly as bad as Gustav was for me.
I am glad you made it through the hurricane.
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Jake - your comment should be at least 2 sentences and address the post more directly.
DeleteMatthew, this is a good start on creating a vivid scene. Think about adding even more details: what you were thinking, what you could hear, see, smell, feel of the sheets, etc.
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